The story that I will still keep working on my "Midnight Apocalypse" story. Because, the plot of the story has a good beginning, so maybe the rest of the story will be as great as the beginning of the plot.
The second thing that I will talk about is the reason why that my story was a good story? Because there many strange, and unheard of things in my story. For example, a car that looks like a bucket of bolts, pool of blood, etc. Now for the third and last of all, how can I improve it. I can improve the story by come up with new dialouges, similes, metaphor, and many other things that we have learned in our ELA class.
Sound like you are on the right track. What is the conflict? How will it get worse and how will it resolve at the end?
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