The story that I will still keep working on my "Midnight Apocalypse" story. Because, the plot of the story has a good beginning, so maybe the rest of the story will be as great as the beginning of the plot.
The second thing that I will talk about is the reason why that my story was a good story? Because there many strange, and unheard of things in my story. For example, a car that looks like a bucket of bolts, pool of blood, etc. Now for the third and last of all, how can I improve it. I can improve the story by come up with new dialouges, similes, metaphor, and many other things that we have learned in our ELA class.
Wednesday, March 7, 2012
Sunday, February 26, 2012
A Topic that Was Just Right for Me
The only topic that was just right for me was the electronic musics, or dubstep. I always wanted to do a research on modern musics, it always make me happy.
Wednesday, December 7, 2011
Debate Questions
Q#1: What did you do well?
A: What did I did well was that I have a good acting and talking.
Q#2: What could you improve?
A: What I need to improve was that I need more information about the evidence.
Q#3: Whose speech did you enjoyed the most? Why?
A: I mostly enjoys Daily's speech, because he has a good information source.
Q#4: What speech did you enjoyed the most? Why?
A: I enjoyed the
Q#5: What did you enjoy about the debate?
A: What I enjoyed about the debate was that I have a good time talking about my debates with my friends, even though we have some very rough times.
Q#6: What did you dislike?
A: What I dislike about the debate was that what we have to debate, sometimes it could be very hard to debate.
A: What did I did well was that I have a good acting and talking.
Q#2: What could you improve?
A: What I need to improve was that I need more information about the evidence.
Q#3: Whose speech did you enjoyed the most? Why?
A: I mostly enjoys Daily's speech, because he has a good information source.
Q#4: What speech did you enjoyed the most? Why?
A: I enjoyed the
Q#5: What did you enjoy about the debate?
A: What I enjoyed about the debate was that I have a good time talking about my debates with my friends, even though we have some very rough times.
Q#6: What did you dislike?
A: What I dislike about the debate was that what we have to debate, sometimes it could be very hard to debate.
Monday, October 10, 2011
Assignment #1
What I have done well in my autobiography speech is that I didn't afraid to talk, but what I need to improve is to be more accurate with my voice.
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